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in the morning petals swim
beautify in the mist
January beneath
blue shadow
to flood this garden
with honey
time may run behind
a picture
an ugly lie to ease
some woman's head
foolish writings together
with drink to
smooth the cold Monday
he cries in chains
but the rose
dreams void and
bleeds reddened symphony
as soft a music
as the tears of a
mother's delirious sadness
in the rain
random poem we had to do in our workshop using Desktop Poet.
I didn't know which category to put this in... I'm not much of a poet :dummy:. We just had to pick random words and put them together :B
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OpenLocks Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
I actually really like this...

It makes me think...
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sinclair13 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
O_o it does? About what?
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DesuDan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Professional General Artist
wtf is that all about? xD! it's like a cryptic clue in resident evil :dummy:
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sinclair13 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
lol i know right? XDDD Our lecturer just said put some words together and don't think too much about it :lol: I thought it would be fun to post it on here
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DesuDan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Professional General Artist
right xD you crazy aussies :meow: i reckon you did a top job of it, 100% randomness in it's purest form :D
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sinclair13 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
XD thanks
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DesuDan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010  Professional General Artist
no problme :iconexcitedlaplz:
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TheGreenGentleman10 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
Sounds cool! Hey, you could probably use this poem in Blood Rose!:D
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sinclair13 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
nuh... it's too retarded :lol:
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TheGreenGentleman10 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
Okay!
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